Book Review #1 When Broken Glass Floats

Dec 14, 2008



Book Review
Why or why not you should read When Broken glass floats By Chanrithy Him

For the Reading circles this semester I chose to read the book When Broken glass floats by Chanrihy Him. I chose to read this book because the story line was a lot like another book that I had read and liked. I usually like this style of writing but as you will soon tell, I did not particularly like this book.
During the reading of this book I learned lots of things, one of them being DO NOT PROCRASTINATE. If you procrastinated in this project you would become behind and have to re do lots of work and read more. I personally thought this book was sad, slightly boring and too long. I usually am pretty optimistic but with this book I just couldn’t stand it. It would constantly switch from the past to the present so soon you weren’t sure which was which.
She would be talking about her brother, she had 9 other brothers and sisters so after a while it got confusing, but the really confusing thing was each brother and sister had a nick name because all of there names were so long. Then it would just skip back and forth. This book was pretty serious though. I don’t recommend It to anyone bellow the age of 12, it was serious and long. A young person who was not used to reading long book’s would not even been able to struggle though it. I read a lot and trust me it was very, very hard not to just give up and put the book down.
Another thing that I didn’t like about the book was that she used Thai words for things like Grandpa and Grandma. She had told us the meanings of these words once in the book so the next time you saw it you would have forgotten and not had any idea what it meant. I think that if you liked the book Because of Romek By David Faber you would like When Broken Glass Floats because they are both about real life stories that are sad, and in both of them there whole family dies and they have to start over. I think that if David (Because of Romek) and Athy (when Broken Glass floats) met each other they would be great friends, because I think that they would be able to understand each other in ways that no one else could get.
So over all, I would not recommend the book to readers that like action and adventure because this book has none. My group members had a hard time reading this book too, so I know its not just me. I have nothing against book’s , I love reading but this book was so dull that I lost interest. But that’s because I only like to read adventure novels.

Lord of the flies # 13

Oct 20, 2008

Ashlen Sepulveda

Chapter 13: The Death of a Hero

Ralph looked back at the island watching its shape fade into the distance. He turned back to the ship and looked at the other boys who were also silent. He turned to Jack, who had been his friend then his enemy and was now his friend again.
“I won’t miss it,” jack said looking back at the island,
“I am so glad that we are finally going home” Ralph saw the tears burning his eyes. All of the boys on the island had been scared, they would all go on with there lives and try to forget the horrible things that had happened on that island but none of them would truly forget. The naval officer came up the stairs.
“You should all come down now, its starting to get chilly” they all looked at Ralph to see if that was what he had wanted. Ever since they had gotten of the island Ralph had taken the position of being the leader.
“He’s right, let’s go down before we catch a cold” Ralph's voice was hard he had not forgiven them for killing two of his friends. He walked down the stairs letting them sit in the cold with harsh wind. A couple seconds later the rest of them descended the stairs into the warmth of the cabin.
“Dinner will be soon so don't start something now” the captain said.
“But you guys can go play or something”
He smiled trying to put as much warmth into his smile as he could. He thought about the expressions on the children's faces when he had found them. He shivered inwardly. They had looked like animals with all that blood and dirt. There faces had shown fear but also a rage that was too mature for there small children's faces. The one with the red hair, he had looked like he was about to kill that kid. If I hadn't got there in time, he walked to the kitchen thinking about how things would be different.
Jack stared at the wall. He was bored out of his mind. After they had gotten of the island everything had changed. He was no longer the hunter but he was the killer, the one no one wanted to be with, no one understood him, his life. As a child he had been mistreated. He had always wished that he could be away from that hell of a life. His parents had sent him to a boarding school not being able to handle him. He had been so exited, finally he could start over. But everything had gone so wrong. The plane had shaken and he knew he was going to die. He had been thankful to be alone with himself at least we wasn’t with his family. But he hadn’t died. He had woken up to the bright sun which he would soon know all too well. And now he was returning home to the on place he hated most.
Ralph walked into him room; it was weird not having the open sky above. He felt trapped, that if something happened he wouldn’t be able to escape. An animal instinct had been drilled into all of them on the island and it would never go away. The distinct to survive no matter what.
“Lets go get something to eat” Ralph said, Jack stood up and walked to the door ignoring him as he walked past Ralph looked at him as he passed by. Even thought he tried to hide it Ralph knew that Jack was soft and venerable on the inside, Ralph had seen the bloodshot red eyes from crying. Poor Jack Ralph thought and followed Jack into the dinning hall.
They sat down at the table and started eating. None of them were used to eating food yet. There bodies were so unused to normal food after staving for months. They all dug in like animals forgetting all of the manners they had ever been taught.
The officer sat there eating with his knife and fork wondering what had God done wrong for these children end up like this? The officer felt awkward sitting there with all these children grunting and tearing apart there meat with there teeth. Finally he had to say something.
“Do you boys remember anything of when you lived in England” The naval officer hadn’t wanted to approach the subject of how long they were on the island and how many people had there been. He knew that two of the children had been killed but he didn’t want to know. Finally the tall blond one Ralph answered.
“We do, but it’s sometimes hard to remember…”
The naval officer looked at him shocked by his answer
“How long were you on that island” he whispered afraid to know the answer. There was a long pause then he said.
“I can’t honestly remember”
“I think it might have been more than a year, we are not sure. There’s something about this island, it’s weird. Time passes faster on the island that it does out side.”
“When were you born lad”
“1928 he said slowly”
I gasped that was impossible he was just as old as me and yet he looked so young, I turned looking out the window to where the island was supposed to be… but it was no longer there. Just a plain expanse of water stood before us. I turned back to them wondering for the first time what was real and what fantasy was.
“You’re just as old as me” I choked out unable to speak.
“Yes I am” he said slowly, we haven’t told everyone about this small… fact. We don’t want people looking for the island.
“But if the island doesn’t want to be found it wont be” said a sweet child’s voice. A little boy no older that 9 walked in. He looked up at me through long eyelashes and smiled.
“Percival! What are you doing here?” Ralph said
“Oh I was just seeing the other ships and who was on them, I mean we don’t want to leave anyone behind do we?”
Several ships had taken eight or nine children on them, when they had first seen them they weren’t sure if they would be easily handled. They had turned out fine but they had still kept the precaution. When the crew had arrived at the island they had seen fire all over the island and were scared until they had seen the little boys running along the beach. The reason why they had found the island in the first place is because they had found several dead bodies’s floating in the water and they had made a trail straight to the island.
The men had looked at the maps and charts but nether of them had show that any island existed, they were skeptical at first that anyone could live on such an island but then they saw the some, and fires don’t make themselves. They had anchored near by and sent out a small fleet of ships to check and make sure the area was clear. They were war vessels and they had wanted to make sure it was not an enemy trap.
As the officer told the children the story of how he had found them he tried not to think about that these “children” were as old as he was. They had suffered much more than he had that was to say. Then the angry brunette boy spoke.
“Aren’t you going to ask us who died” everyone was shocked into silence by his blatant question.
“Uh...” what was I supposed to say?
“So who died when you boys were on the island?”
They speak of death like its nothing the officer thought.
“Only two people died” he said coolly,
“But that’s to no matter” he said smirking at the blond, Ralph.
“They were useless to begin with”
Ralph jumped across the table knocking glasses and food to the floor
“You take that back Jack Merridew! You take that back or ill kill you!”
Ralph was so mad, how could he say something like that. I had thought he changed Ralph thought. I was obviously wrong.
“I will not” Jack said and sneered
“What are you going to do about it?”
“Il Kill you that’s what!” Ralph said and started to strangle jack.
The naval officer tied to get there but the rest of the boys stopped him.
“This has to be done” said Percival in his innocent child’s voice
Jack’s face was starting to turn a bluish color but Ralphs hands wouldn’t back down. Ralph had put up with Jack for too long and wasn’t going to deal with him any longer. Jack struggled a few times more then was still….
How can I annoy him Jack thought to him self watching Ralphs expressions. Jack didn’t want to go home. No matter what he would not rerun home. If it meant killing himself he would do it just so long as he didn’t have to see him family ever again. He made a comment about Piggy and Simon and about how they had died and he saw the anger flare up in Ralph. Almost there he thought and made another comment. This was it. He would die but he would be happy he had had an adventure that most kids would never have. He had spent a year on an island and had lost ten years of his life. He was old. He was tired and he wanted to go to sleep.
He barley felt the hands at his thought slowly squeezing the life from his frail body. His heart pumped faster in its final attempts at saving his life. But that was not what he wanted to he lay there at peace and then his last breath escaped and he whispered.
“Thank you” his final breath was gone his body and soul had left him. He shuttered once then Jack Merridew died.
Ralph stood there looking at Jacks lifeless body. He was so pale and cold. It was if all the happiness and life had fled his body, oh yes he had heard the words “thank you” how was the thanking him for taking his life. He stood there paralyzed not knowing what to do. He felt hands on his arms pulling him away for Jacks body. He stood up and shuttered.
“This was what he wanted” Percival said. And then he explained jacks life to the waiting audience.
“Jack and I were cousin’s, the first day we landed on this island he told me not to tell anyone or show anything that might show we were related. At home jack had been born into a poor family. His dad had left him at a young age and his mother was abusive.
She never was happy for anything he did and didn’t really care about him at all. On the other hand he had grown up next to me. I had had the perfect life as a child. My mother and father were both hard working well achieving people, even though we hadn’t had a lot of money my father and mother had always worked super hard to be able to get me what I wanted. Jack had hated his home life. He had spent most of him time alone by him self. But then he had started hanging out with the bad boys from school after that he had changed he became rowdy and was mean to everyone from then on. I don’t know what they did to him but it changed him forever.
When my mother told him that we were going away to boarding school he was so happy, finally he could be away just be himself. But as you well know everything had gone wrong and we landed up on the island and he UN knowingly had slipped back into his old role of bully. He has done some horrible things in his life, but you guys must understand he has been mistreated and criticized his whole life.” Finally Percival finished his speech. By now all of the boys had tears in there eyes for there poor friend jack.
“Maybe it is better this way” Ralph said whipping burning tears from the corners of his eyes.
“He would have wonted it to be like this” Percival said and hugged Ralph.
What happened to these children to become so mature yet so old yet so young thought the officer helping then heave Jacks body over the edge of the boat.
Ralph picked up Jacks lifeless body and let him drop from the boat to the water. Jacks body hit the water with a great splash and sank deeper and deeper to the bottom of the sea.
The End

Lord of the flies #12

Oct 7, 2008

Lord of the flies
Chapter 12: Cry of the Hunters
Perspective: Jack

Blood and rescue

I was so angry how dare Ralph come into my camp and disrupt it like this. Everyone was talking, oh Ralph oh Ralph. He shouldn’t have that much power over my people. Some of the boys were just wandering around others were eating meat and beginning to diddle. I saw the twins sitting in a corner looking like outcasts, well they are. Serves them right for not joining our tribe in the first place.
The ululations of the boys startled me, they started singing that annoying song again “kill the pig cut its thought spill its blood” I mean I had made it up and I didn’t go around singing it all the time. I was thinking about sending a cordon of soldiers out to look for Ralph but I decided to play nice this one time and let him die in peace.
I walked over to the twins. The second they saw me walking over they immediately looked away. They knew something. “Where is Ralph” I said glaring at them. I don’t know said Sam. Oh really I replied and jabbed him with the but of my spear. Hah., I glared at them and was about to poke him with the other side of my spear when Eric spoke up. He’s in the forest. Well duh I knew that, where else would he be. But at least they were talking. He’s somewhere near here though. That’s were he said he would be. Oh so this little brat had actually had a conversation with him.
I hissed in frustration why couldn’t he just die already!
Let’s go I said and jabbed his ribs. He let out a little gasp of pain than got up. Were are we going, he said. Were going to go find Ralph. Other people had been listening to our conversation and one offered up an idea. Burn down the forest that’ill get him out of hiding. That was actually a good idea I thought, but I didn’t say anything to the boy because I didn’t want him to think I liked him.
As we were getting our spears and running out of camp we passed the distended body of the sow which had been left in a corner to rot, flies were gathered at her body buzzing around.
We set of. We saw him about around here, Eric said. I heard a rustling in the bushes were he was pointing I motioned everyone to be quiet and crept closer. Then suddenly Ralph burst out of the shadows a wild look in his eyes. He was covered in blood and dirt and had a weird look to him, it took me only a few seconds to understand this. Then we were running after him through the trees and smoke, down the beach and then he went around a bend. We ran around the corner and he was just standing there looking at a man, and yes I do mean an actual adult man. We all just stood there dumbfounded. He wore a blue suede jacked with gold trim and silver epaulettes. He was talking to Ralph and every once in a while looking over at us. I heard him ask how many dead. I would not want to reply to that question…then the reality of what was happening struck me, we were free we were of this island, we could go home and see our families and get our life’s back. Tears of joy and sadness for all who had been lost stung my eyes, I cried and I was not embarrassed that other boys would make fun of me, for everyone else was crying too.

Lord of the flies #11

Oct 5, 2008

Lord of the flies
Chapter 11: The Castle Rock
Perspective: piggy

The end

I stared around me trying to make out comprehensible shapes. All I saw were Grey shapes moving around. Pretty much I was blind. I could not see, I was useless. “In the wild when the mother lion had a cub with a disability the mother would kill its own child for the safety of the other cubs” I recited the line from the great book of animals in my head. What was I thinking? Suicide just wasn’t my thing. I went on. We were making our way towards the camp.
It was so embarrassing. Ralph had been holding my hand for the past 25 minutes. I was going to be delirious if this kept on any longer. I didn’t want the other boys to see me like this. “when we get there let go of me” Why Ralph said back. They already think im bad enough, holding your hand isn’t going to make it any better.
Soon enough though he let go of my hand and moved forward without me. “just stay here he said” wait maybe not holding me hand wasn’t the best idea in the world. I heard them talking and just stood there.
A while later I heard a sound like something giant had come out of the earth and was moving towards me. Then I heard something “piggy run” i dropped the conch on accident and heard it crack into a thousand pieces the talisman had been broken.
But the sound was too close and my unfit body couldn’t get its self out of the way in time. Smack. Something huge smacked into my body, I heard the loud cracks as my body began to fall apart. I touched my hand to my stomach. I could already fell the warm wetness seeping through my clothes. From then on I knew I was going to die. All of this took less than a second and another second later piggy’s dead body hit the ground.The cessation of piggy's life had ended. At least he wasn’t alive when he hit “Ralph thought” and as if answering that thought piggy’s whole head spit open and tons of blood and brains split out onto the wet sand. A moment later the water rushed up bubbled a little and took piggy’s gruesome scene out to sea.The truculently of what had happened disappeared into the water.

Lord of the flies #10

Oct 2, 2008

Lord of the flies
Chapter 10: The shell and the glasses
Perspective: Jack

Chief

I stared at the group of boys before me. I counted them of in my head. the illumination struck me. That was pretty much all of them. All except Sam and Eric. Ralph and piggy could die for all I care. Tonight we hunt! I said in a loud clear voice. The boys cheers filled the clearing. I will go with two other people to the other camp to take there fire. Who will join me. theologically two boys raised there hands.
We set of while the sun was setting. When we arrived at the camp we couldn’t see any fire. Then I saw the remains of what used to be the fire. I gowned all this time and effort for nothing. No that wasn’t true. Instead of taking there fire and having the risk of burning down the whole island I can make the fire.
Piggy’s glasses I whisper. I herd the recognition in there voices. Yeah. We walked toward the hut. I could hear faint whispers. I moved forward. I herd my name said.
We rushed in and then after that all I felt was pain and chaos. Through it all I saw piggy’s glasses fall to the floor, I picked them up and ran out of there. My work was done. We were so barmy tonight i said laughing. we were back at camp and were were sitting eating roasted pig over a fire, piggy's forgotten glasses throughn aside. We had purged Ralph of all he had left

Lord of the flies #9

Oct 1, 2008

Chapter 9: A view to a death

Perspective: Simon

The end

I awoke with a start, the world spun circles in my head. I sat up trying to remember the last thing before I fainted. The pigs head, the lord of the flies. I looked over where I knew she would be staring at me. I waited for the now familiar voice to speak. Nothing happened, I waited for one more second then decided to make my way back to camp. I needed to tell them about the beastie. The parachutist. Poor person. I wouldn’t have wanted to land on this island. I started trying to make my way back to camp. But my legs were so tired, I just wanted to lay down and sleep……
But no I had to tell them. After a while im not sure it started to rain, hard heavy droplets. They pounded my head making it hard to think. I stumbled on. When did it get so dark. I couldn’t remember anything. I remember falling to the ground after I tripped over a tree root. I lay on the ground a while letting the rain clean away the blood and dirt from my face, In a way it also cleared away the horrible things that had happened to me on this island. After that I was content.I saw the corpulent body's in front of me and made my way towards the fire. The light.Its phosphorescence shown in the dark. I heard them chanting that annoying killing song. I rolled my eyes. I crawled out of the bushed into the light.
Then everything went drastically wrong. The circle of boys encircled me chanting “kill the beast” what was happening “I’m not the beast” I tried to say, but they were too loud. Then the pain struck me, hard in my back. I doubled over in pain and gasped. What were they doing, then another and another blow. My head, my back. I saw dark blood seeping through my clothes, I saw the deep cuts and new burses, I saw the blood in the water. Dripping. But surprisingly I couldn’t feel it. My whole body was numb. I couldn’t move my brain was the only thing working. Then something hit my hard in the head and everything went black…………..
Then soon after I was looking down at a scene, a young to skinny almost sick looking boy lay on wet dirt surrounded by numerous boys they had all stopped and were looking down at the boy who had numerous bloody cuts and bruises all over his body. Some of the boys wept. Others looked down with sadness. The boy on the dirt’s eyes stared of seemingly into the sky. Almost peaceful looking. I felt bad for that strange boy, but I knew that he was probably in a better place happier to be away from that nightmare of a life. I looked down once more, I recognized him somehow. Maybe I had seen him in a dream or another life, after that brief second I forgot him and the brutal scene………………
I didn’t remember.

Lord of the flies #8

Sep 29, 2008

Chapter 8 gift for the darkness

Perspective : jack

Pigs

I can’t stand Ralph anymore, I quit. Hes not some prefect or something I won’t keep on being his slave. I've spent too long following his orders and abiding his rules. This is seriously pissing me off, I thought as I walked forward to the platform. I was so nervous I had never done anything like this before and no amount of training would have prepared me for this. “I’m leaving” I said, opposition rang clear in my voice. I could hear the gasps around the circle. I wiped my dirty palms on my shorts and looked around. Everyone stared at me with blank faces of disbelief and horror.
Had I done something wrong? “Everyone who’s with me stand up” no one stood. The silence was defining. Anger streaked though me, hot tears stung my eyes as I glared at everyone. “Fine” is said. I was glad my voice didn’t shake. I would get them back, I would.
I ran faster than id ever ran. I knew before I started that they would not try to stop me. Why would they? They all hated me. They hated me from the beginning. They didn’t understand. Growing up in England my home life had been a living hell. I was glad to be on this island. Glad to finally be free. Killing was my way of getting back at my family for all of those years. I sat huddled against a rock, waiting, waiting. Would they ever come? Footsteps in the distance, Hushed voices. Was that them. “jack” some one called out. Robert? One of the twins? I couldn’t tell. I stood up. Letting my hair fall in my face so that they couldn’t see my blood shot eyes. “hey jack were sorry about back there” Robert said. “its just we were so surprised that we didn’t know what to do” “but were here now” “ and we want to be with you”. “first your going to start by calling my chief” I said in a hard cold voice. They looked at each other then decided. “yes chief” Good. They were obeying me. My plan was working.
A couple hours later more people came and we set up a camp, “lets go hunt” I said. Cheers echoed around me. We started running. We knew that the pigs hid on the top of the mountain in the shade in the afternoon so that’s were we heeded south along the burnt area making sure to leave no trail behind us. Then I heard a sound. I signaled them to he quiet and to move slowly. Had we found something? I walked forward and peered stealthily around the fronts. The biggest sow I had ever seen lay in the cool shade. More than 10 piglets nestled against her chest. A killing instinct took over me and pushed any remorse for killing a mother out of my head. the taboo was suddenly gone I signaled to spread out and get ready for attack. Then I moved forward fast. She jumped up scattering her piglets on to the hard rock. Spears jabbed at her stomach her neck her head. the demoniac crime we committed did not sink in.Blood, masses of blood every where and then she lay still. Her eyes staring of into space. We would have food tonight. After that we pounced her letting her hot guts lay beside her. some animal would eat them, what did i care.

Lord of the flies #7

Sep 27, 2008

Shadows and Tall Trees

Perspective: Simon


the hunt


We have just left camp and we are heading towards the mountains to find and kill the beast. I am scared, im not sure if i want to be here. The feeling of panic and fear is strong in the air. Why did i do this in the first place. I should have stayed with piggy and the lil'uns. jack thinks he can kill the beast.
Hah, the beast is not something you can kill. Its something we created. Ralph feels fear but will not subdue to it. He will not admit to jack that he is scared.
Jack is scared though. I bet somewhere in the farthest corner of his mind there is that doubt. Can he really do it, can he really kill the beat. It is night time now. I want to be alone. The a chance to escape. I will cross the island alone. In the dark. With no moon to guide me. It is ok though, i can make it though. I will make it through.

Lord of the flies #6

Sep 24, 2008

Chapter 6: beast from air
perspective: piggy

beastie

I dont belive that there is such thing as a bestie.Ever scince i was little i was raised not belliving in that sourt of stuff. But today was different. I could see the fear on there faces as they told us of how they had seen the beastie. Is it real. Jack was waxy after they told us. He doesnt believe in it ither.
When is this interminable talk of a beastie going to end. Its not real. I can understand how some lil'ons can believe that but Simon. I cant understand. And i remember him saying something about the beastie being human? What no that's not possible. Jack had been acting mutinously lately. He is so embroiled in this conflict that he has forgotten his duty to the tribe. he is hunter, he need food. Today jack Ralph and some other hunters left to try to kill the beastie. I hope they survive and are fine. I don't mind if something happens to jack though. I wish he would leave this island. I hate it here.

Lord of the flies #5

Sep 23, 2008

Chapter 5: beast from water
perspective: Simon

Fear

Fear, its not something you can describe but its something that most people feel. I know everyone felt fear today at the meeting. Fear for Ralph, fear of the beastie and most of all fear of each other. Fear isn't an incantation, its something you bring on your self. Fear is the sound you cant explain the feeling of cold that you cant describe.
The sounds of children's lamentation still scares me. To hear that much pain put in one sound,i cant describe it. I feel so bad for them. They are still young and before now unafraid and curios. Now they know how cruel human beings can truly be. The eggigy of fear was almost overwhelming today. The ludicrous behavior of jack was unacceptable. The jeering way he treated piggy was horrible. I couldn't stand it. But that is not the point. This needs to stop it needs to end. I cant keep living in a world without rules without decorum.

Lord of the flies #4

Sep 22, 2008

Chapter 4: Painted Faces and Long Hair
Perspective: Jack

Rule breakers

So what. The fire went out. It was a stupid plan to begin with. Whatever . I don’t care
I killed a pig. I felt the awesome power. I killed an animal, I always knew I could do it.
Even though some people may have doubted me I did it. I killed something I enforced my will over it. Everyone is always so belligerent towards me I don’t get it, What did I do to them.
It doesn’t matter though. All of these peoples impalpable behavior is getting on my nerves. They think there so cool, but they cant kill anything. After I killed the pig I can still see the gouts of blood just poring from its neck. Blood sickens me. I will not tell anyone though. I don’t want them to think im a sissy.
I know many people think im a malevolent person. But that’s just a blatant way of saying it. I am much more deep than that. No one knows the true me.

lord of the Flies #3

Sep 16, 2008

Chapter 3: Huts on the Beach
Perceptive: Ralph

Pigs pigs pigs

Pigs that’s all anyone talks about. Yes it would be nice to get some meat but Jack is getting on my nerves. That’s all he does 24-7. And no one is doing anything; Simon is the only one helping at all. I don’t want to be leader. But I don’t want Jack to be leader ether. Jack is so rapt in his pig compulsion that he is forgetting our main goal.
To get of this island. Even with all these vicissitudes I am still whiling to do what ever it takes to free our selves of this place. Some times Simon is so inscrutable, he’s so smart and how he talks it’s sometime hard to understand. I can understand how the lil’uns are scared. Sometimes it is so opaque in the mornings and with al those tendrils everywhere I can understand were they are coming from.
I really hope we get of this island soon. That’s all I can think about. As long as I can survive on fruit until someone saves us that’s what im going to do. Some mean would be nice though……..

lord of the Flies #2

Sep 15, 2008

Lord of The Flies

Chapter 1: fire on the mountain
Perspective: piggy

Fire

Fire, It’s so dangerous so unpredictable. Who could have known? Those poor kids. Now they are dead it my fault. No its Jack’s fault he’s just so spiteful and horrible and errant. How can no one else see it? I can see how he induced all those people to follow him. He will lead them to there deaths. I hate him.

Ralph is another whole story. He’s so confident but I was the one who met him first. He cares only for himself. I am still resentful of how he told everyone about piggy, how could he. And I though this would be a beginning. I was dead wrong.

That fire will eventually burn down the whole forest. I cant believe I saw them capering In the trees. They killed countless children. But no one will listen to me. “shut up” that’s all they ever say. That’s all anyone says. Il change there minds. Il show them what kind of person I actually am. I hope things on this god forsaken island get better or I don’t know what will become of us.

Lord of the Flies #1

Sep 13, 2008

Lord of The Flies

Chapter 1: Sound of the Shell
Perspective: Jack

New Island

Ever since I've been stuck on this island I've loved it. Having no one to boss me around nothing to do. Personally I think its great I hate how some stupid kids are crying and whining about it they don't appreciate what they have, I'm not going to help them. I wont be the one to tuck them in and tell them everything it all right. Because its not.
There is something off about this island. But I cant put my finger on it, today we were hunting and i saw that piglet and i couldn't do it. I couldn't kill it, I cant take somethings life....... But I'm going to have to forget that and survive. If killing is what it takes than so be it. I take care of myself as for everyone else, well they can fend for them selves.
Ugh and I hate it everyone is like Ralph!! Ralph!! He's not even that great. I don't see anything in him. Wow so he has a shell, SO WHAT! he didn't even find it. That fat kid piggy did. He's not so great he's going to get himself killed taking care of all those little kids. I should be the leader I can take care of myself.

s u m m e r

Aug 22, 2008


Even though were on vacation im still gonna do posts
im really bored and i miss all of you guys im so happy
that were starting school
on monday though!! im on the Mr . T team
we should still keep our blogs so that we can keep in touch
fun fun fun!

Romek final Post

Jun 12, 2008

1. I think the most horrific part of the book is in the second to last chapter when he is at Bergen-Belsen because it was disgusting when he talked about how the dead bodies were covered with lice that were sucking there blood also another part that was horrible is when he was talking about people eating the flesh of the dead, Most of the book was depressing and sad its just after reading almost the whole thing you become numb and don't feel anymore. I think the saddest part of the book though is when his whole family is murdered and when his brother is tortured to death. It is also sad when in the end it describes how he is dying of typhoid, it really makes you think about life.

2. When david is in Krawinkel Camp he gets a good job that probably saved his life, he gets to feed the german shepherd dogs. At first he is scared because they have done horrible things to them but then he finds a broom handle and uses that to push the food bowls towards the dogs, after he takes a bite of the dogs food he loved it, it is made out of cooked meat and vegetables and lots of other stuff. Every time he gives the dogs some food he took some out of the bowl and ate it, that job helped him by surviving by keeping him warm and providing him with a easy job that pays off with good food. I am pretty much positive that if he hadn't gotten that job he would have died. He has good luck.

3. When David arrived at Bergen-Belsen all he saw was hundreds and hundreds of dead people. That pretty much gave him a sign,After the first day he was sick and tired and he knew he could not go on much longer. After the first week he was sick with typhoid which is an illness that happens when you don't eat or drink, and he had a fever. I think it was horrible when he had to cary dead people and burn them. I also think it was disgusting that people ate the flesh of the dead. If i was in that position i never would have done that, I think that the conditions were so non human like in Bergen-Belsen and i can not possibly ever understand how someone would have been able to live with them selves knowing what they had done.

4. When David is almost dead from Typhoid in the end of the book a  person runs in and says were free, david thinks he is making a cruel joke and tells him to go away. Then another person runs in a says its not a joke and over the loud speakers the Americas and the British are telling the people that they are free, David starts Crying and says " i did it mama, I survived" When i read that passage in the book i felt sadness and joy. Sadness because finally he is free after years of being in concentration camps and joy because he survived that horrific incident that destroyed almost his whole life. I was very proud and almost overwhelmed when he was brought to a hospital, because i felt such happiness that he was safe.

5. 
David Faber's book, Because of Romek, should be required reading in all middle schools, high schools, and universities because all students need to learn about the horrors of the Holocaust. After reading the book "Because of Romek" I am sure that all middle school students should read this book. Before i read the book i knew hardly nothing about the holocaust, i just knew that it was a part of our history, nothing more. But after listening to the horrors that David Faber went through i decided that everyone should know about this. One of the things that struck me the most happened during our presentation with david faber. He was talking about how recently another holocaust had almost started some where in the world and he said "where was the world when we needed them, Where were they!" I started crying at that point listening to this old man tell us about how horrible his life has been  because of one man and what he thought was right. Please respect David faber and all of the thousands of people that died during the Holocaust. Let us prevent starting a new holocaust by learning by are mistakes.

Project Reflection Renaissance Ball project

Jun 6, 2008

Name: Ashlen Sepulveda


Project Reflection



Project Title: Renaissance Ball project

Class:C Dates:2008


*You may type directly in this document and copy and paste into blog, or simply address each of the following in a post. It should be approx. 2 pages worth of writing.

PURPOSE: In this section, explain what you were supposed to learn and what you were supposed to do.



The purpose of this project was to learn about the renaissance time period and all the the people and places that it had. In this project we were assigned a person to become. After we had done lots of research on our person we wrote a biography on our person. When our paper was finished we had to fully become our character at a ball in which we had to act our our character, we learn the Pavon which is a common dance back then, we also learned how to act if you were upper class and how to act if you were lower class.

WHAT I LEARNED

In this section, tell what information or skills you learned or improved.


Mary Stewart was Born on December 8 in Linlithgow 1542. She Died on 8 February in Fotheringay 1587. She was the only daughter of James V of Scotland. She became queen when she was only three days old. Her Mother was Mary Of Guise. Became Queen of England, Scotland, Ireland and France in her life. She was Executed at 44 years old. She lived in prison for 19 years. Her only son became the king of England when queen Elizabeth died. I learned about the time period in which Mary Stewart lived, the Renaissance. I learned about what the sold at markets and why it was important. I learned the names of the most famous artists and why they were inportant.

REFLECTION


In this section, reflect on your experience. Did you like the project? Why or why not? How did you do? What would you do differently next time?



I Liked this project because i loved learning about the interesting people back then and how they changed history. I also loved dressing up and becoming someone else for a day. It was fun! I also loved learning a dance and doing it with my friends. I fell like next time I could not goof of as much in class and work harder to make my paper better.


ARTIFACTS

You should have at least one artifact from each project on your DP. What document, picture,link will you have for this project? or


This will be on my blog

Romek #3

May 28, 2008

1. I think it was an incredible experience hearing someone from the holocaust speak to us. I think it will be great to be able to tell our children that we heard a survivor because when our children are grown there wont be any survivors left. I cried, It was heartbreaking hearing him speak about the murders of his whole family, you could hear the sadness and anger at the Germans in his voice. I was really really touched by him, and i hope he lives a long time so he can do what he promised to his mom.

2. I think Romek was proud because he was in a organization kinda like the partisans and he was glad that his little brother was following in his footsteps to stop the Germans from reaching world domination. I think he was happy because he knew that if he died David would be able to survive and take care of the family, that he wasn't a little kid anymore.

3. Because i think some of the Germans were still evil but still had some feeling so they made him go back to the ghetto. I think they knew if he went back the the ghetto he would eventually die in a concentration camp or starve of just get shot, i don't think it was meant to be a favor of any kind. I just think he has great luck.

Romek Post # 2

May 21, 2008

1. I think he kept the pigeon because with all the sadness and death he didn't want to kill something beautiful. Also he was really lonely and just needed sometime with someone who was depressed and crying about the war. The pigeon saved his whole family's life because when the pigeon didn't come it hinted the mother that something was wrong and so they hid and were saved.

2. I think that Puskow the Vacation camp was probably the easiest out of the camps, not to say it was easy im just saying that it wasn't like gruesome and horrible like some of the other camps he will eventually go too. I think it was called the Vacation camp because it was not that hard and was just preparing them for Ashwitz and some of the other horrible camps were they could die in an instant i think it was just a "prepare" camp

3. What is it like knowing that you are one of the few survivors of the Holocaust?

Do you ever regret something you did during the holocaust?

Romek Post #1

May 16, 2008

1. Before we started this project i already knew allot about the Holocaust before i started reading "because of Romek" When i was 11 i went to the museum of tolerance. When i went there i learned a lot about the holocaust and allot about Hitler. I learned about what the Germans did to the Jews, and i learned why they did that.

2. a) I feel really bad for Davids family, First because I know that they all die and second it must have been a horrible experience for all of them. The whole family is scared because they don't know what to do. Soon, too soon. David is going to have to take over the family and he is not sure if she has the experience nor the courage too do so. They are all very worried for there sun's.

b)I think that David Faber can write such a moving and realistic story because it actually happened to him and if something like that happened to anyone and they survived I think it would be imprinted in there memory for ever. The whole story is true, even if some people don't want to admit it.


3.I think that when David puts his mind to it, he can do anything. I think that is part of the reason he survived the holocaust and it alive today; I think he is cunning, smart, and has a kind heart. Later on in the book I know he helps people in need, and when you help people, they help you back.

Aztec Project reflection

May 5, 2008

Name: Ashlen Sepulveda
Project Reflection: Post on your Blog

Project Title: Aztec Mural project
Class: C Dates: May, 5, 08

PURPOSE:
The purpose of this project was to learn about the Aztecs and there culture. In order to learn about this we had to create a mural symbolizing an important part of the Aztec culture. My group and I decided to make a mural about the Aztec gods and their Sacrifices. All the people in my group word hard to achieve a perfect mural. Which i think we did. All the people in my group worked hard using each other to accomplish things. In the end our mural turned out great and we got a good grade.

WHAT I LEARNED

In our Mural depicts how the Aztecs would have human sacrifices to please the gods. At the bottom of our mural are skulls. The skulls represent the people that the Aztecs sacrificed. All over the skulls is blood. The blood is from the people that were sacrificed so that the gods could be happy. Above the skulls is the stairs of a temple. A man stands at the top of the stairs holding a heart in one hand and a knife in the other. Blood drips from his hands on to the stairs. There is a trail of blood going down the stairs leading to a body of a man. His body is crumpled and broken, he is covered in blood. He is a slave Probably from another near by village, the Aztecs sacrificed him. There is a large hole in his chest were his heart should be.
The Aztecs would sacrifice people to make the gods happy. When they sacrificed a person that represented killing the gods. That was a good thing. The gods were once mortal too, so when they sacrificed a person it represented the birth of the gods. The Aztecs also sacrificed people if it was a time of famine or poverty. When the crops were bad the Aztecs would sacrifice a person to make the gods happy, If the gods were pleased then they would make the crops grow better.
Behind the Priest is an eclipse. An eclipse is when the moon goes over the sun. That was a very bad sign. Its meant that the gods were very angry. When the gods were angry they would punish the people, and for the gods not to punish the people they would make sacrifices. Which brings us back to the main purpose of our mural.
On either side of the eclipse are two gods. The god of corn Xochiquetzal and Quetzalcoatl
the feathered serpent god. The gods are looking down on the people waiting for their sacrifice.
depicts how the Aztecs would have human sacrifices to please the gods.  At the bottom of our mural are skulls. The skulls represent the people that the Aztecs sacrificed. All over the skulls is blood. The blood is from the people that were sacrificed so that the gods could be happy. Above the skulls is the stairs of a  temple. A man stands at the top of the stairs holding a heart in one hand and a knife in the other. Blood drips from his hands on to the stairs. There is a trail of blood going down the stairs leading to a body of a man. His body is crumpled and broken, he is covered in blood. He is a slave Probably from another near by village, the Aztecs sacrificed him. There is a large hole in his chest were his heart should  be.
        The Aztecs would sacrifice people to make the gods happy. When they sacrificed a person that represented killing the gods. That was a good thing. The gods were once mortal too, so when they sacrificed a person it represented the birth of the gods. The Aztecs also sacrificed people if it was a time of famine or poverty. When the crops were bad the Aztecs would sacrifice a person to make the gods happy, If the gods were pleased then they would make the crops grow better.
        Behind the Priest is an eclipse. An eclipse is when the moon goes over the sun. That was a very bad sign. Its meant that the gods were very angry. When the gods were angry they would punish the people, and for the gods not to punish the people they would make sacrifices. Which brings us back to the main purpose of our mural.
On either side of the eclipse are two gods. The god of corn Xochiquetzal and Quetzalcoatl
the feathered serpent god. The gods are looking down on the people waiting for their sacrifice.

REFLECTION
I enjoyed this project because I loved working in a group with my friends. In this project we got to choose the people we wanted to work with so i chose a small group to work with. We had 5 people in our group including me. There were two girls and three guys. At the beginning i thought it might be hard being in a group with mostly guys but it turned out not to be a problem. One of the guys which was the most talkative had to leave the school. Which thankfully was an improvement. When he left all the other people in our group didn't slack of, they did there jobs. I have nothing bad to say about this project. If you stayed on task and didn't do anything stupid they would have had a great time like me and my group had.

ARTIFACTS
I will put a link to my project reflection from my blog on my DP

Reading responce OP#3

Apr 23, 2008

Title: speak
By: unknown
Pages: 1-92

Wow The ending of this book was great!
I loved how the author focused on the ending.
My favorite part was of course the end were she is in the closet with Andy and he is like trying to rape her again but she stands up for herself! im so proud of Melinda for doing that. This whole book she has been a sad solitary character but in the end she shoes that she has true spite when she get him corned. She could have killed him then but she didn't.
Im really glad that the soccer team found her. Now everyone will know so they don't try to be mean to her ans so they don't hurt her. Over all this book was a little depressing but really really good.

Question:
If the author made a sequel what do you think it would be about?

reading group question 2

Apr 9, 2008

why do you think that melinda likes david perkins?

Reading group Post 2: Speak

Reading group Post 2: Speak

Title: speak
By:
Pages: 1-92

Nothing incredible has happened yet but melinda keeps on being anoying. Why cant she get over the fact that she got raped and live with that fact. I know it sounds like alot but you know she can be nice to people. She is always pretending to be someone else. She used to be happy and popular but now shes just depressed and emo. WAKE UP!!!
i really hope she decides to do something about her life. At least she has started to clean the lawn and i cant belive she thought that boy liked her
And she tryed to comit scuicide!!!!
what is rong with her. this book is makeing me mad


OP# 1 Speak

Mar 31, 2008

1. I think that Melinda is depressed because all of her friends hate her and don't want to talk to her. When she tries to talk to them they make rude comments and walk away. She used to have a whole group of friends that she hung out with but now its just her "all Alone"

2. I think everyone hates her because she called the cops at a party at someones house and some kids got arrested. I don't know why she called the cops. I think its because either she got raped or she saw someone get raped. I think this because on the back of the book it states hints towards that.

3. I think she called the police because she got raped or she saw someone get raped. I personally think that she got raped. I don't know why

Question # 1 Speak

Choose 1 or write a little about each one

Why do you think that Melinda Is so depressed?
Why does everyone hate her?
Why did she call the police?

Project Reflection, global warming

Mar 13, 2008

Project Title: Moral courage website project ____________________________________________________________
Class: Humanities

Dates: 031208

The purpose of this project was to learn about moral courage and global warming in our case. My group and I decided our topic would be global warming. Some other people in our group disagreed but all in all we decided together. We all knew that global warming was a very controversial subject, but we wanted to help people, so we kept with our original plans. All the kids chose a subject that had to do with moral courage. Moral courage is standing up for whats write even when its not popular. We choose global warming because many people have different views on global warming. Some People think its real and others do not. I personally think its really real.

WHAT I LEARNED

In this project, I learned how to work in a big group to get things accomplished. My subject was animals affected. Soon our world will look like something from a science fiction move. 30% of the world species will be extinct and the temperature rises 4.5 degrees. That is not that much more than it is today. This shows you how much global warming is really affecting our planet. But, global warming is affecting polar bears the most because they can't live in water like the other arctic animals. Polar bears spend most of their lives alone just hunting and sleeping, and the only time they see other bears is to mate and that's it. Polar bears are now dying because they have no where to live because of global warming. Global warming is melting the ice caps and making the arctic into a ocean with no ice for the animals to live on. Polar bears swim hundreds of miles just to get to land. And when they finally get there, they are so tired they die of starvation because they are so week and hungry. Polar bears are becoming extinct because of humans, because we are causing global warming which is triggering a series of events that may soon kill everything in our world that we have tried so hard to make.

REFLECTION
I didn't necessarily love this project. I always love working in groups so it wasn't that bad
. I think it was too long. We had a lot of time to work on our project but i think it was to much stress and to much time. I liked this project, it was fun learning about global warming.

ARTIFACTS
i will put all of my info about animals effected on my dp

Reading responce OP#3

Mar 7, 2008

Ashlen Sepulveda 3 | 7 | 08

New moon 2 hours

Stephanie Meyer 83 - 123

123

Response:


I feel really bad for Bella. I can’t believe that Edward left. That makes me so mad. Bella and Edward were meant for each other.

September

October

November

December

January

Months have gone by since Edward left Bella. Since he left, in the book New Moon, Bella has been depressed. She hasn’t done anything about it but mope. All of her friends have left her. None of them talk to her anymore. When Bella and Edward were together they separated themselves from there friends because they were totally enthralled with each other. But now that Bella doesn’t have Edward its really hard for her.

Some of her friends have come back to her, at lunch they sit on the same table but they have different sides.

There is the good side which has Bella, Jessica her shy friend, Mike, the boy who likes her and is her friend, and some other people. On the other side is Angela, Bella’s first friend in Forks, but now because of Courtney, she has turned against Bella. Bella is happy she has some of her friends.

After that Bella goes to a campfire at Billy black’s house and gets to see Jacob her friend again. The moment she sees Jacob Bella’s happy for the first time in months. Jacob and Bella become really close friend’s. And that all I got. I hope Bella and Jacob become really good friends.



Vocabulary

Glowered: looking at someone in a mean way.

Dense: thick

Trudged: walked in a stompy way.

Inevitable: unstoppable.

Depravation: stopping some one from getting something.



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Reading responce OP#2

Feb 27, 2008

Ashlen Sepulveda 2 | 27 | 08

New moon 2 hours

Stephanie Meyer 1 - 83

83

response

This book is the sequel to a book that I really liked. So far this year I hadn't gotten around to reading this book so i decided that for independent reading i would read it. In the last sequel by Stephanie Meyer Twilight the story was that there was a girl, Bella who's parents where divorced and she wanted to move to the small town of forks to live with her dad, Charlie. When Bella gets to forks shes sad because she misses her mother. In the story the mother sis portrait as child like, so Bella's life has been taking care and protecting her mother. Well when Bella gets to forks she hates that its so wet because it always rains there.

After she gets over the wetness she goes to the local school. She is afraid that no one will like her because in her old school in Arizona she was an out cast. But when she gets to the school she notices that people like her and she she becomes friends with some other boys and girls.

But then she meets Edward. Edward is a vampire and i know when i say the word vampire your thinking Dracula, suck blood coffin's ex but Edward is a different vampire. He has been alive for about 80- 100 years and has thought hes seen all of humanity when he meets Bella. The thing that catches his eye for her is the smell of her blood. Edward and his family had tried for hundreds of years to not drink human blood instead they drink the blood of wild animals. Edward does not want to ruin his family's tradition so he leaves for a couple days and goes to Alaska where he meets up with some of his old friends.

Meanwhile Bella gets the impression that Edward hates her and hes sad because she think she felt something for him. But when Edward gets back he seems allot nicer and is happy to become friends with Bella. Bella on the other hand wants to be more than friends. He warns Bella that he is dangerous that he is a bad person but Bella refuses to listen. Later in the story the fall in love and go on countless adventures together some of them risking Bella's life...

But so far in new moon the sequel sad sad things have happened. Last book Bella had been almost killed by a sadistic vampire who wanted Edward to be hurt. Bella had survived but Bella had come very close to dying. Edward had still not gotten over it when it was Bella's birth day. At her birth day she accidentally gotten a paper cut. When Edwards brother smelled the blood he went crazy and tried to kill Bella which had really hurt Edward seeing his brother trying to kill his true love. So i think i knew what would happen even though i wished it wasn't true. Edward had to tell Bella that he didn't love her and that he and his family were leaving forks to get away from her. I know it might not sound very sad to you but i cried my eyes out it was very sad for me.

Vocabulary

resurface: did not come up again

stirred: moved slightly

surreptitiously: acting in a secret way

unwillingly: not wanting to do something

predictable: knowing that someone is going to do something

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OP # 4 Ties that bong ties that break

Feb 12, 2008

Question #1:
Do you think the author left the book at a cliffhanger? Do you think there should be a sequel? If not, do you think the author wrapped the book up nicely? Explain why, or why not.
I think he could have made a sequel but of coarse he did not or we would have read it. He did make another book though something like an ocean away a something apart i don't know but thats what we will be reading next in our group.

Question #2:
What was your favorite part of the book? What part was it? Was there a certain part that if you could change it, you would? If so, what part?
i liked when the boy started being nice to her it made her fell better which made the story a little happier

Question #3:
If you were in Ailin's place, would you do all the things that she did the same? What were some things you would do the same? What were some thing that you would do differently?
i would not get my feet bound, but some of the other things i do not agree with. i would definetly not get bound feet thow Way to go Ailin!

Over all this book was OK its not the best book iv ever read but it was not the worst

OP #3 ties that bond ties that break

Feb 11, 2008


1 If you were eileen would you go back to China? why or why not?

No i wouldn't i would want to make a new life. this story is good



2 What did you think of the outcome of the story?

i thought the author did a good job of finishing the story he left some parts undone but most of the story he covered


3 Why do you think the houseboy suddenly treated Eileen with kindness?

I think he started to feel bad for her and i think he started to like her and be nicer to her

OP #2 ties that bond ties that break

1. Do you think Eileen (Ailin) will quit the job of being an amah? Why or why not?

I think that she will quit because who wants to work at something they dont want to be. She wants to be a school teacher, not an amah. I really hope she accomplishes her dreams. because shes a good person.


2. Do you think the houseboy and Eileen (Ailin) will become friends? Why or why not?

I really hope so. I think they will become great friends. they have A LOT in common so they can become easy friends.


3. If Eileen (Ailin) chooses to go home, what do you think will happen?

And what do you think her family might think? I dont think she will go home. I wouldn't want to. I would be afraid of big uncle hes mean!

Ties that bond ties that break OP#1

Jan 21, 2008

1 I think that is just what they call each other to respect each other, maybe its just something they do in Asia I wouldn't know also in so far from the bamboo grove the family members referred to each other and honorable brother ex..


2 since he is one of the old people in the house and you have to respect your elders i think that he think he can do what ever he want and just be mean and boss people around


3 i wouldn't do it i would run away probably my parents wouldn't make me do it in the first place but still i just wouldn't do it