Chapter 4: Painted Faces and Long Hair
Perspective: Jack
Rule breakers
So what. The fire went out. It was a stupid plan to begin with. Whatever . I don’t care
I killed a pig. I felt the awesome power. I killed an animal, I always knew I could do it.
Even though some people may have doubted me I did it. I killed something I enforced my will over it. Everyone is always so belligerent towards me I don’t get it, What did I do to them.
It doesn’t matter though. All of these peoples impalpable behavior is getting on my nerves. They think there so cool, but they cant kill anything. After I killed the pig I can still see the gouts of blood just poring from its neck. Blood sickens me. I will not tell anyone though. I don’t want them to think im a sissy.
I know many people think im a malevolent person. But that’s just a blatant way of saying it. I am much more deep than that. No one knows the true me.
2 comments:
hmm noone posted any comments on yours. well ill make first.... nice job describing jack in your post. i like how you did a great perspective a jack.
- just felt like posting on yours... :D :)
Great job describing Jack's emotions after he finally achieved his goal. I like the way you placed the vocabulary words as well. Nice work. Keep it up.
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